Friday, 2 October 2009

Friday 55 Flash Fiction

'Lovely,' said the workman as he took the mug.

'One sugar, wasn't it?' she smiled.

He nodded, sipped, spluttered and put the mug down.

'Must get on,' he muttered.

Back in the kitchen she saw the salt and knew what she'd done.

She made an appointment with the optician immediately.


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13 comments:

  1. Ooo, less is definitely more! Wonderful ;-)

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  2. My kind of 55. I loved it and the ending.
    Perfect


    Mine is posted

    HERE.

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  3. Been there ~ done that!

    I've done two 55's this week. You can find them here. Enjoy and have a wonderful weekend.

    Ciao,

    Chef Kar

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  4. Oh my.....ewww salt! I can see his face so clearly and her embarrassment. At least he didn't curse at her or throw it in her face...:D Nice job!

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  5. Janice.....?
    Speaking from experiance?
    hahahahha
    Excellent 55 My Dear..
    Thank You so much for joing our little Friday Funfest!
    Hope to see you again next week.
    galen

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  6. Thank you for taking the time to leave comments folks - much appreciated:-)
    Not yet but give it time Galen. (What a lovely name by the way - I'd have called my son that if I'd known of it!)

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  7. I accidentally done this with my good friend and she swears I did it on purpose to stop her having soooo much sugar with her tea. I'm innocent . . I swear!

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  8. LOL! I made that mistake once. & It WAS the eye problem!

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  10. But dragons like salt in their coffee. Humans are so weird.
    Great 55

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