Monday, 10 May 2010

Microfiction Monday #30


Susan from 'Stony River' organises and hosts this weekly meme. She provides a picture and the challenge is to create a story in 140 characters or less. Click here to read more marvels of microfiction – and perhaps be tempted to join in.
'You'd think they'd put the bath house closer to the dormitory.'
'And the towels clash horribly with our robes. Not at all harmonious'
(133 characters)

22 comments:

  1. Ah, living harmoniously in a chaotic world. I feel for them :-)
    Nicely done.

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  2. Oh there's just no pleasing some people is there? LOL

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  3. I can see what you wrote going through those three men's minds! I have visited your blog whenever you have left a comment on mine. I'll come to your blog now when my feed tells me you have new updates (I am your newest follower).

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  4. They're going to have to go a ways to find a bath house in Washington, D.C.!

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  5. Hahahahahaha..so hilarious!
    Well done!
    mine is here
    Happy Monday!
    Happy MM!
    hugs
    shakira

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  6. I was struck by the lack of color coordination as well. These guys need a better costumer.

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  7. My daughter is going to camp this week. I wonder if she'll have the same problem?! :)

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  8. Thank you all, kind folks :-)
    Linda - welcome. I'd better warn you I write a lot of rubbish . . .

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  9. Love how you brought these monks to our world.
    Fretting... about towels and if they clash with their robes. Funny take!

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  10. Love it, Janice! See, everyone worries about clashing colors! Great one for the day! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  11. "not at all harmonius"

    haha! great entry, thanks!

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  12. I love the colour orange. It is kind of flambloyant and warm and energetic colour. that made me think coz monks are normally associated with peace, calm, tranquil, noh? hmmm. I now know what you mean about harmonious...

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  13. That last line is so perfect. SO perfect!

    but makes me look forward to camping this summer LOL

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  14. This is great! Love the idea.

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  15. LOL...great take on this photo. Matching towels and robes are a must LOL :) Have a great week ahead :)

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  16. Very clever. I keep forgetting about this meme! It seems like my weekends have been super busy lately.

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  17. Hard to have a clean and healthy outlook with such garish color combinations. Nice job@

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  18. Saffron is a difficult color to compliment...I see what you mean!
    good job

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  19. Commenting late, but better late than never, eh?

    Loved your take on the colour-clashing towels and robes! Very ingenious.

    Have a great week.

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