Monday, 29 October 2012

Mag 141 In this moment


Thanks to Tess Kincaid who organises and hosts this meme. To read different responses to the prompt please click here.


I don’t feel the rain when I’m in your arms,
Just your mouth on mine, spicy and warm -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me again.

I see no-one else when we’re together,
Just smiling eyes, beautiful mouth -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me again.

I lean into you, you hold me closer,
Just us in this moment, ignore the world -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me again.

15 comments:

  1. Who could say no to such a request? :)

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  2. Lovely words, lovely form, lovely poetry!

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  3. Your refrain works so well for you here. Just wonderful.

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  4. Yes - that's exactly how it feels!

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  5. I have nothing against the kisses, but the rain I would feel, that's for sure !

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  6. Truly lovely and well constructed.

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  7. I am a shallow, superficial person with no poetry in my soul, because my first thought was "They're going to ruin her lovely shoes, standing there in the pouring rain....."

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  8. A prelude to a wonderful romance story.

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  9. Your lovely carefree take matches the Mag perfectly.

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