tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post1872891676957138662..comments2024-03-29T11:25:29.973+00:00Comments on jabblog: Magpie Tales #68 Dancingjabbloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-86446196488019050682011-06-10T16:42:52.573+01:002011-06-10T16:42:52.573+01:00This was a professional well-written story. I love...This was a professional well-written story. I loved it! I can actually relate to being humiliated a school dance kids can be so mean.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-51624683332803130902011-06-09T03:04:50.368+01:002011-06-09T03:04:50.368+01:00Vividly told. I, too, would be seeking a touch of ...Vividly told. I, too, would be seeking a touch of vengeance. :) Glad to hear it was fiction, but I'll bet somewhere is a girl for whom it is the truth.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-26771389376189137322011-06-08T20:13:16.137+01:002011-06-08T20:13:16.137+01:00Thank you all for your comments. This story is ent...Thank you all for your comments. This story is entirely fictional although I used to go dancing at weekends.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-80602332696095004572011-06-08T19:52:10.476+01:002011-06-08T19:52:10.476+01:00I can remember those days - hoping and hoping that...I can remember those days - hoping and hoping that some young man could see your true potential.<br /><br />When we'd caught our catch - I think we did forget our friends a little.<br /><br />Yet, I hope your excellent write was fiction - who needs friends like that?<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-42719531165632016682011-06-08T02:24:04.718+01:002011-06-08T02:24:04.718+01:00I love how this very well-written story builds ten...I love how this very well-written story builds tension right from the beginning to the surprise ending. Great take on the prompt!Margaret Pangerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995968579194433270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-86229674122293194642011-06-08T01:41:48.802+01:002011-06-08T01:41:48.802+01:00Great story, what an ending! Gross as the kids say...Great story, what an ending! Gross as the kids say. Loved your writing.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-82753520512931141432011-06-07T19:46:37.234+01:002011-06-07T19:46:37.234+01:00Fabulous! please stop by...xxxjFabulous! please stop by...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-32248447281227864452011-06-07T07:20:03.944+01:002011-06-07T07:20:03.944+01:00What a terrible story. And I say that with admirat...What a terrible story. And I say that with admiration. It made my blod run cold.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-57335969614472735962011-06-07T05:53:25.019+01:002011-06-07T05:53:25.019+01:00ack. hope this is fiction
what a friend!ack. hope this is fiction<br />what a friend!lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-38512655221130587442011-06-07T02:45:06.632+01:002011-06-07T02:45:06.632+01:00Great story. That poor girl, I felt like I was bac...Great story. That poor girl, I felt like I was back in high school at the Friday night dance :(Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14175778756449339363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-65917301073879773012011-06-07T00:53:16.777+01:002011-06-07T00:53:16.777+01:00Oh, that's funny and awful, and I hope fictiti...Oh, that's funny and awful, and I hope fictitious! But, if not it't true, bad experiences make good stories. ;-)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-15693007171340496652011-06-07T00:32:43.268+01:002011-06-07T00:32:43.268+01:00OMG! How evil ... it's time for you to dance ...OMG! How evil ... it's time for you to dance again.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-89799280232427134912011-06-06T23:22:35.581+01:002011-06-06T23:22:35.581+01:00ooh i hope that is fiction
what a friend!ooh i hope that is fiction<br />what a friend!lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-66906106760614322702011-06-06T20:55:21.454+01:002011-06-06T20:55:21.454+01:00People suck, sometimes. This was a terrific read.People suck, sometimes. This was a terrific read.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-32647351066496414782011-06-06T20:40:35.352+01:002011-06-06T20:40:35.352+01:00I hope you gave him - and her - the evil eye in r...I hope you gave him - and her - the evil eye in return.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-60288600257666345812011-06-06T19:57:51.736+01:002011-06-06T19:57:51.736+01:00I'm with Tess. I did not expect that ending.
...I'm with Tess. I did not expect that ending.<br /><br />You really painted the scene well. I was there, right along with you.<br /><br />Being an American, I was charmed by "snog" and "bloke."Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-66644684131165369482011-06-06T18:56:23.374+01:002011-06-06T18:56:23.374+01:00Thanks for the giggles. I wasn't expecting the...Thanks for the giggles. I wasn't expecting the end. Wonderful story.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-5445202605576212942011-06-06T17:13:00.394+01:002011-06-06T17:13:00.394+01:00I agree with Lolamouse!
Perhaps you should have a...I agree with Lolamouse!<br /><br />Perhaps you should have asked for the other one and scooped one out of that girl's socket.. (vengeful..?) Would have served her only right!<br /><br />C'mon.. go back to that dance and declare that the guy was a loser since he tricked with a stone eye.. if he were a man enough- let him scoop it in real!<br /><br />Sending you hugs.. xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-39209250254671375012011-06-06T15:31:02.939+01:002011-06-06T15:31:02.939+01:00Not a nice experience, but very well told.Not a nice experience, but very well told.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-52127979974283362952011-06-06T15:25:27.148+01:002011-06-06T15:25:27.148+01:00What a fantastic story! Girls are the most awful c...What a fantastic story! Girls are the most awful creatures!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-41678708136372374752011-06-06T15:16:51.051+01:002011-06-06T15:16:51.051+01:00Oh my ! what a story ! The first time I saw a glas...Oh my ! what a story ! The first time I saw a glass eye was when I was about 10, I spent the night at a friend's place and when I went to the bathroom very early morning there was an eye looking at me in a glass ! It was her father's eye, he had lost one during the war. At that time I found it not even strange, rather funny, an eye in a glass looking at me ! Innocence ...Gattinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636525277807715146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-38516411679401339552011-06-06T15:13:43.477+01:002011-06-06T15:13:43.477+01:00Yes you did paint a very clear and vivid picture o...Yes you did paint a very clear and vivid picture of a different time. I could see it all as I was reading. Very well done - and with friends like that one certainly doesn't need any enemies!The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-2805039531602198532011-06-06T15:03:16.243+01:002011-06-06T15:03:16.243+01:00I have to say Wow. You painted a clear picture of ...I have to say Wow. You painted a clear picture of the events as though I was there watching. Great write. :)Grammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13278964537964027566noreply@blogger.com