tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post3306715080891391489..comments2024-03-29T10:54:38.731+00:00Comments on jabblog: Book Blurb Friday #4 Humpty Dumpty Sat On The Walljabbloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-62229815306962055662011-06-24T18:48:17.129+01:002011-06-24T18:48:17.129+01:00Action, deception - love it!Action, deception - love it!Vanilla Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08857752710040192834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-38433677142657819692011-03-27T02:38:15.601+01:002011-03-27T02:38:15.601+01:00Thrilling AND chilling! This one has promise!Thrilling AND chilling! This one has promise!Tammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141883867104777688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-76814233700752062282011-03-26T15:29:23.595+00:002011-03-26T15:29:23.595+00:00Now I have to know what happens! Excellent hook an...Now I have to know what happens! Excellent hook and a well written blurb. I've always thought Marcus is a great name.Tony Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06798586432645889182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-31609485574399121752011-03-26T15:03:43.269+00:002011-03-26T15:03:43.269+00:00I'm hooked straight away into this awesome mys...I'm hooked straight away into this awesome mystery/thriller! Great intrigue just in the blurb....I want to read on.Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-26917068789655356222011-03-26T04:31:56.367+00:002011-03-26T04:31:56.367+00:00The writing in this piece leads you in, and you ca...The writing in this piece leads you in, and you can't help but follow...Susan Fobeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927064519907342393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-53138266902500681552011-03-26T02:22:07.631+00:002011-03-26T02:22:07.631+00:00Sounds like a wonderful mystery/thriller. You got ...Sounds like a wonderful mystery/thriller. You got me with the missing daughter and the estranged wife. I like the personal angle being drawn into the investigation. Nicely done!Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05048410207952052295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-76631391762554397442011-03-26T02:09:29.876+00:002011-03-26T02:09:29.876+00:00Just when it seemed exciting enough, you threw in ...Just when it seemed exciting enough, you threw in the missing daughter to sweeten the pot!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-68153549033469569092011-03-25T23:15:25.545+00:002011-03-25T23:15:25.545+00:00Wow, that's pretty scary and I want to read mo...Wow, that's pretty scary and I want to read more! Nice job.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05296300032567383021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-24217700754435791772011-03-25T20:54:03.122+00:002011-03-25T20:54:03.122+00:00You had my heart pounding and it nearly thumped ou...You had my heart pounding and it nearly thumped out of my chest when I read of the missing child. Great suspense, mystery.Linda O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982895073903619018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-39055145595284344552011-03-25T20:41:25.167+00:002011-03-25T20:41:25.167+00:00I love how you connected the "unremarkable&qu...I love how you connected the "unremarkable" corridor with the "unparalleled violence."<br /><br />Also, I agree with Liberal Sprinkles. The addition of the missing daughter adds to the thickness of the plot.<br /><br />Well done!Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-73343897018433101952011-03-25T20:13:50.290+00:002011-03-25T20:13:50.290+00:00There's so many investigators prowling up and ...There's so many investigators prowling up and down this corridor that I doubt there's room for anything else to be going on!!<br /><br />And plenty of threads to this particular tale too.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-2536163545695327162011-03-25T18:43:03.324+00:002011-03-25T18:43:03.324+00:00It would be hard to be terribly violent in such a ...It would be hard to be terribly violent in such a narrow corridor, but hey. Good luck, Fielding.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-56045842210938759012011-03-25T17:47:58.044+00:002011-03-25T17:47:58.044+00:00Very intriguing, I like the twist with the missin...Very intriguing, I like the twist with the missing daughter, it adds to the rich storyline. Nice!liberal sprinkleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04566049026515076261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2060029060849550094.post-41778966242570675332011-03-25T16:54:52.764+00:002011-03-25T16:54:52.764+00:00Wow! Excellent, I can't wait to read the rest...Wow! Excellent, I can't wait to read the rest of your action packed thriller!<br /><br />Kathy M.Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07171271956883698673noreply@blogger.com