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to Tess Kincaid who organises and hosts this meme. To read different responses
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I don’t feel the rain when I’m in your arms,
Just your mouth on mine, spicy and warm -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me again.
I see no-one else when we’re together,
Just smiling eyes, beautiful mouth -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me again.
I lean into you, you hold me closer,
Just us in this moment, ignore the world -
Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
again.
:-) Truly lovely.
ReplyDeletePearl
Delicious...
ReplyDeleteso lovely.
ReplyDeleteWho could say no to such a request? :)
ReplyDeleteLovely words, lovely form, lovely poetry!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem of love!!
ReplyDeleteYour refrain works so well for you here. Just wonderful.
ReplyDeleteAaaaah. Nice one!
ReplyDeleteYes - that's exactly how it feels!
ReplyDeleteSo sensuous!
ReplyDeleteI have nothing against the kisses, but the rain I would feel, that's for sure !
ReplyDeleteTruly lovely and well constructed.
ReplyDeleteI am a shallow, superficial person with no poetry in my soul, because my first thought was "They're going to ruin her lovely shoes, standing there in the pouring rain....."
ReplyDeleteA prelude to a wonderful romance story.
ReplyDeleteYour lovely carefree take matches the Mag perfectly.
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