Showing posts with label liver. Show all posts
Showing posts with label liver. Show all posts

Saturday, 9 November 2024

To lighten the mood – maybe

 

To lighten the mood – maybe

A few years ago, I responded to a writing prompt from Delores, who used to blog but had to give up. She asked, ‘How many ways can you work the word ‘sliver’ into a sentence?’

I dished up some doggerel, reminded of the times I would insist that my children ate the liver I’d cooked occasionally, because it was ‘good’ for them. It was cruel. Of course, it may have been the way I cooked it – I will never be acclaimed as a good cook, not even, I fear, a passable one.

One of them has been an avowed vegetarian for most of her adult life! I wonder why?

My apologies to those who may have seen this flight of fancy before.

 

A sliver of liver
Makes small children shiver
When struggling to swallow
The unswallowable,

And all of a dither
Their tears start to slither,
Unstoppable river -
It’s horrible.

They gaze at the giver,
A look that would wither
The hardest of hearts -
Ineffable.

‘Just a sliver of liver,
To make you grow strong,’
The adult’s persuasion -
Implacable.

The sliver grows bigger,
And drier and harder,
It can’t be choked down -
Unspeakable.

If all children ate
The things that they ‘should’
They’d grow into giants -
Implausible.

Monday, 19 September 2016

Delores at ‘Mumblings’ challenged us with a writing prompt. She said, 

Feel like having some fun with a writing prompt?
How many ways can you work the word 'sliver' into a sentence?
Maybe someone will write a poem.

This got me thinking so thank you for that, Delores. I need a kick-start in the mornings – or maybe just a kick.

Well, I just had to dish up some doggerel . . .


A sliver of liver
Makes small children shiver
When struggling to swallow
The unswallowable.

And all of a dither
Their tears start to slither,
Unstoppable river -
It’s horrible.

They gaze at the giver,
A look that would wither
The hardest of hearts -
Ineffable.

‘Just a sliver of liver,
To make you grow strong’,
The adult’s persuasion -
Implacable.

The sliver grows bigger,
And drier and harder,
It can’t be choked down –
Unspeakable.

If all children ate
The things that they ‘should’
They’d grow into giants –
Implausible.

(That got much darker than I intended!)

Why not meander over to 'Mumblings' and see what else is on offer?