Monday, 10 May 2010

Microfiction Monday #30


Susan from 'Stony River' organises and hosts this weekly meme. She provides a picture and the challenge is to create a story in 140 characters or less. Click here to read more marvels of microfiction – and perhaps be tempted to join in.
'You'd think they'd put the bath house closer to the dormitory.'
'And the towels clash horribly with our robes. Not at all harmonious'
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22 comments:

  1. anthonynorth10 May 2010 at 08:53

    Ah, living harmoniously in a chaotic world. I feel for them :-)
    Nicely done.

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  2. Gattina10 May 2010 at 10:38

    Hahaha !

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  3. Akelamalu10 May 2010 at 11:22

    Oh there's just no pleasing some people is there? LOL

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  4. Anonymous10 May 2010 at 12:39

    I can see what you wrote going through those three men's minds! I have visited your blog whenever you have left a comment on mine. I'll come to your blog now when my feed tells me you have new updates (I am your newest follower).

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  5. SouthLakesMom10 May 2010 at 12:41

    They're going to have to go a ways to find a bath house in Washington, D.C.!

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  6. Unknown10 May 2010 at 13:20

    Hahahahahaha..so hilarious!
    Well done!
    mine is here
    Happy Monday!
    Happy MM!
    hugs
    shakira

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  7. first5010 May 2010 at 13:59

    I was struck by the lack of color coordination as well. These guys need a better costumer.

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  8. Unknown10 May 2010 at 14:56

    My daughter is going to camp this week. I wonder if she'll have the same problem?! :)

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  9. jabblog10 May 2010 at 15:43

    Thank you all, kind folks :-)
    Linda - welcome. I'd better warn you I write a lot of rubbish . . .

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  10. Peggy10 May 2010 at 15:46

    Love how you brought these monks to our world.
    Fretting... about towels and if they clash with their robes. Funny take!

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  11. Sylvia K10 May 2010 at 16:07

    Love it, Janice! See, everyone worries about clashing colors! Great one for the day! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  12. tilden talks...10 May 2010 at 17:48

    "not at all harmonius"

    haha! great entry, thanks!

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  13. Kristine10 May 2010 at 19:15

    I love the colour orange. It is kind of flambloyant and warm and energetic colour. that made me think coz monks are normally associated with peace, calm, tranquil, noh? hmmm. I now know what you mean about harmonious...

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  14. Susan at Stony River10 May 2010 at 20:32

    That last line is so perfect. SO perfect!

    but makes me look forward to camping this summer LOL

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  15. Kay10 May 2010 at 21:13

    This is great! Love the idea.

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  16. Anonymous10 May 2010 at 21:30

    LOL...great take on this photo. Matching towels and robes are a must LOL :) Have a great week ahead :)

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  17. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}10 May 2010 at 22:10

    Now I laughed out loud at this,

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  18. christopher11 May 2010 at 03:27

    I love the irony.

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  19. EG CameraGirl11 May 2010 at 03:45

    Very clever. I keep forgetting about this meme! It seems like my weekends have been super busy lately.

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  20. hope11 May 2010 at 23:26

    Hard to have a clean and healthy outlook with such garish color combinations. Nice job@

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  21. Suz12 May 2010 at 00:08

    Saffron is a difficult color to compliment...I see what you mean!
    good job

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  22. Michael G-G13 May 2010 at 05:47

    Commenting late, but better late than never, eh?

    Loved your take on the colour-clashing towels and robes! Very ingenious.

    Have a great week.

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