Lovely Susan from ‘Stony River’ organises and hosts this weekly meme. Thank you Susan J She provides a picture and the challenge is to create a story in 140 characters or less – including punctuation!
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Here is this week’s picture followed by my offerings.
The two young couples were absorbed in each other but Walter watched the lava flow and wondered if he should warn them of impending danger.
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Alfred was unlucky with the ladies. He gazed into the distance. A beard might make him more attractive. He could feel a few bristles now.
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While Jane and Theo read poetry and Josiah dreamed, May told John the facts of life. He couldn’t wait to practise! She bade him be patient.
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O well done! LOL ... all three are soo good, clever you :o)
ReplyDeleteAll three are fabulous. The second one made me giggle with glee!
ReplyDeleteWell done. Have a lovely day.
I like the beard idea! good one-thanks.
ReplyDeleteAll are excellent. Three totally different paths to take. :O)
ReplyDeleteThree is definitely a charm! I love each and every one of your microfiction takes--> BRAVO!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed all three. Never noticed the lava :-)
ReplyDeleteAll three of these are terrific, Janice! You are good at this!! Hope your week is off to a great start!
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All three are great, each got a chuckle.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy your microfiction Janice.
ReplyDeleteFlowing lava and indecision doesn't speak well of his character, does it?
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed each clever story!
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That first one really grabs my fancy. Have a beautiful Valentine's Day!
ReplyDeleteI don't know which one I liked the best--all three were good, which makes it hard to choose. I did like the beard one, especially...guess it was my favourite after all.
ReplyDeleteThese were all good, but I preferred #3 best-just a little on the naughty side... LOL!
ReplyDeleteLove all three, especially the first. I know a few people who are that laid back. LOL Very clever.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great trio! Loved the larva flow...hehehe!
ReplyDeleteI especially like the first one. Doesn't he realize he's in danger along with the others?
ReplyDeleteLOL - all three are just wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThree for the price of one has to be a bargain!
ReplyDeleteThe creative juices were flowing!
ReplyDelete#3 gave me the loudest snicker.
Have a great week (and hope your back's better soon.)
I particularly liked the 'bristles' one. I knew his gesture reminded me of somethng but I couldn't think what.
ReplyDeleteThese are all great, JB! I will vote in favor the the third one. Is being patient a part of the birds and bees?
ReplyDeleteMy Nebraska friend, Cliff, in a comment left just the opposite of yours:
"Amanda gently poked Carl in the chest, leaned forward and whispered, "If you try that again, you're a dead man."
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BTW, we are in London now visiting grandkids and kids.
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