Lovely Susan from ‘Stony River’ organises and hosts this weekly meme. Thank you Susan J She provides a picture and the challenge is to create a story in 140 characters or less – including punctuation!
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Here is this week’s picture followed by my offerings.
Fairy Marigold grimaced as she leant over to clean the prince’s shoe. The ribbons on her wand danced in an effort to escape the odour.
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As Primrose put the tracking device in the shoe she noticed tentacles slithering over the front and wondered what was trying to escape.
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Now that's an unusual shoe :-)
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
What fun different ones for the pic of the week, Janice! I love them! Hope your day is going well! Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Excellent, I loved 'The ribbons on her wand danced in an effort to escape the odour' hehe.
ReplyDeleteCruel shoes - as Steve Martin might say! Both were wonderfully fun to read! You did a fab job with that prompt! ☼
ReplyDeleteTotally love them.
ReplyDeleteIf I understand well he should use some deo ?
ReplyDeleteOh, I love both stories... such wonderful twists at the end.
ReplyDeleteTwo great stories, Janice! And I love their flower names...:)
ReplyDeleteLynette
Very good ones, Janice, especially the second one, it's great.
ReplyDelete-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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Ah - I never even notices those floating ribbons...or tentacles!
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd one had me ROFL. Very creative and observant slant on the image.
ReplyDeleteMy MM:Mission Impossible
I like the one about the tracking device. Unusual slant.
ReplyDeleteHaha--I like both of these...great job!
ReplyDeleteHave a good week...cheers~
These were both fantastic! I really can't decide on my favorite, although the tentacles from #2 certainly got my attention...
ReplyDeleteI particularly love the one with tyhe "tracking device."
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Haha! FUNNY! I really ought to take part in this fun meme again but my weekends have been hectic lately.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Fairy certainly looks rather cross.
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