Sunday, 30 June 2024

 

Microfiction again

Microfiction 6


Tell a story or describe a scene in 140 characters or fewer. Spaces count as characters.

Will you join?

The two young couples were absorbed in each other but Walter watched the lava flow and wondered if he should warn them of impending danger.

(139 characters)

Alfred was unlucky with the ladies. He gazed into the distance. A beard might make him more attractive. He could feel a few bristles now.

(137 characters)

While Jane and Theo read poetry and Josiah dreamed, May told John the facts of life. He couldn't wait to practice! She bade him be patient.

(139 characters)


20 comments:

  1. She mentioned picking wildflowers with a coy wink. He winked too and eagerly waited for her return.

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    1. Cheeky wench - she'll get her come-uppance.

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  2. These field trips are so boring, should I be teaching them something, can't see anything interesting.

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    1. Very good! Field trips are not to everybody's taste;-)

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  3. Peter felt dejected leaning against a tree, wishing that he should not have joint a road trip with two couples. The barren landscape adds to the misery.

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  4. I can't think of anything for this.

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  5. Not feeling very bright today but enjoyed reading yours 😀😍
    Alison in Wales x

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  6. "Out of shot, while the humans are distracted, a Labrador is eyeing up the picnic..."

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    1. Very good. From experience, the Dalmatians would not be out of shot and would be straight into the picnic. Oh, the shame . . .

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  7. Percy, feeling lonely, watched the flood waters approach. Should he tell his female companions and be the hero, or not?

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  8. I enjoyed reading yours and the others :)

    Hope you've enjoyed your weekend, have a happy new month of July.

    All the best Jan

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    1. It was a peaceful weekend - that's always good.

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  9. Me gusto como resolviste el reto. Te mando un beso.

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  10. Brilliant, as always! One day, I promise I'll make the effort of joining in! xxx

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