Rehash
This is a
story from some time ago, brushed up and polished a little. I hope you enjoy
it.
A Night to Remember
Was I dreaming, or had a noise outside woken me? Whichever it was, I was instantly alert, my body tense, my eyes straining in the velvet black, my heart pounding in my ears. The little noises that are swallowed up in the daily round were insistent and sinister in the small hours of the night. Identifying each one, the settling of the floorboards, the creaking of the wooden walls, the scuttling of small creatures in the roof, I convinced myself there was nothing to fear and tried to relax.
I had bought the shack a few months ago as a summer retreat. It was a simple construction and had neither electricity nor plumbing, but it suited my requirement for a peaceful refuge in bucolic surroundings. My working life was demanding, and I wanted a place in which I could relax completely.
On a sunny day, it was no hardship to fetch water from the well and heat it on the paraffin stove, though it was a different matter when rain pelted from a slate sky, and a sharp wind cut through my clothes. I should not have cared to spend the colder days of the year in my rustic accommodation, but living in it for brief periods helped me to appreciate the modern conveniences of my city apartment.
There was just one thing I had never quite grown accustomed to, but it played a minor role in my rural retreat and I planned my days with care to deal with it. I had grown honeysuckle and jasmine around and over the privy, both to make it look more attractive, and to mask the smell. I didn’t enjoy visiting it in the dark, especially on a stormy night, but sometimes I had to.
Having been startled awake, I realised I needed to venture out to use it. I lit oil lamps and candles in the house as a beacon in the darkness for my return. It was a warm, moonless night, with bright pinpricks of starlight in the enormity of space. I looked up and shivered, though not from cold. There was a strange atmosphere in the clearing around my shelter, as if eyes were watching me. In the distance, a dog barked, and was answered by another.
Not for the first time, I wished I had a dog, but it wasn’t practical in the city, and certainly not fair, as I worked long hours. Perhaps I should start a dog hire company to accommodate people like me. It would be rather hard on the dogs, though, having to adapt to different ‘owners’ all the time. The idea amused me and distracted me from the conviction that I was not alone.
Returning to my little refuge, I was shocked to see that my beacon had disappeared. I could understand one or two of the candles guttering out. The ever-present wind sneaked through every small gap in the log walls, but the lamp flames were protected by glass shades. How could they have been extinguished?
A silent-winged owl soared above my head, making me start and clutch my dressing gown to myself. I felt a touch on my shoulder, and looked round, but saw nothing. I hurried along the path, and something grabbed at my ankles and tugged my hair. I shook myself free and stumbled on. Gasping, I reached the door and fumbled the latch. Inside, I felt for the emergency candles on the windowsill. I was trembling so much that I dropped several matches, but when the candles and lamps had chased away the darkness, I looked around.
Nothing had changed and yet everything had changed. I sensed a tangible presence and noticed a circle of flower petals on the floor. I had not brought any flowers into the house.
I spent the rest of the night in my rocking chair, every available candle and lamp ablaze. As night faded and dawn approached, I needed clean air and fresh water, and went to the well. All around, I heard faint rustlings and whisperings and caught half-glimpses of creatures slipping into the woods surrounding the clearing. There were more flower petals around the base of the well. I felt that I was not alone and yet I was - completely alone. I regretted the lack of close neighbours. My rural shelter had become a nightmare. Was it of my own making? Had I imagined the events of the night?
I sold the property soon afterwards, my sense of peace having been shattered and replaced with a feeling of alienation.
Years
later, I was talking to a friend about that night.
‘What
time of year was it?’ he asked.
‘Summer,
midsummer,’ I said.
‘And
there was a well on your land?’ he asked.
‘Yes.’
‘It was
the fairies,’ he said.
I laughed, incredulous.
‘I’m serious,’ he said. ‘Midsummer’s Night is a magical time, when the veil between this life and another is very thin. I’d say that your well was an ancient holy well. You didn’t observe the rituals, so the fairies were angry with you.’
I shook my head, unable to believe him.
He smiled at me, and nodded. ‘There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy,’ he quoted.
Maybe he was right.
I believe him and if you had only known beforehand about the rituals you could have stayed there. Great story.
ReplyDelete. . . but would I have performed them correctly?
DeleteI don't think it would matter, since you didn't know and was only trying to do them, the fairies would be satisfied.
DeleteThat was fun. 😀👍
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DeleteShould have bought a gazunder!
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a child, I used to stay with a friend who had a gazunder. Her loo was loosely attached to the house in an outhouse.
DeleteI hated our gazunder, our loo was way down in the back corner of the large yard so I always made sure to go before going to bed, even in the dark. My sister preferred the gazunder and as we slept in the same big bed I had to hear her "tinkle" through the night.
DeleteFairies with night vision glasses, I should think. It was a nice read and with non violent ending as I thought it might have been.
ReplyDeleteFairies can be malevolent, particularly if you don't respect them!
DeleteEerie yet enchanting, and your friend’s explanation adds just the right touch of myth and mystery to linger in the mind long after the last line.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoyed writing it, but would run a mile from such an event.
DeleteI was on the edge of my seat reading. I think that angry fairies is as good an explanation as any.
ReplyDeleteYes, we really shouldn't antagonise the little folk.
DeleteSounds like one of those Tales of the Unexpected, good story, well written!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI did enjoy this, a great story, well written and everyone knows there are fairies at the bottom of the garden, mine are quite friendly ... :)
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday
All the best Jan
I'm glad your fairies are friendly folk. You must be doing all the right things.
DeleteThat's a very atmospheric and well-written story, Janice. I loved it! xxx
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
DeleteBeautifully written
ReplyDeleteAlison in Wales x
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed you story.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI lived in a rural situation with an outhouse in my younger years for four years. No fairies, although we had raccoons and coyotes. If I did have fairies, I must have done something right because I never felt their wrath.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the raccoons and coyotes kept them at bay!
DeleteDid you write this story..? Excellent...very intriguing. Kept me trying to figure out what in the heck was out there. Fairies I suppose..
ReplyDeleteYes, it's one of mine. There's always a part of me that almost believes in fairies
DeleteYou write well.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteGreat story. I shall try not to annoy any fairies at the bottom of our garden.
ReplyDeleteI think that's wise.😎
DeleteSo wonderfully atmospheric. I love the details of the sounds and the eeriness of the isolation. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDelete😊
DeleteThe gloomy weather outside my bedroom window was a great accompaniment to your excellent story.
ReplyDeleteI hope the weather has improved now. 😊
DeleteYou are a very good story writer ! Continue !!!
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind!
DeleteBeautifully written. And I like the little mystical twist in the end.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it.
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