The Promenade, 1918, Marc Chagall
It was the end of the war, the Great War, the war to end all
wars. The lucky ones, the survivors, were reunited with their loved ones. The others,
the unfortunate ones, the bereaved, the deceased, the maimed, were forgotten in
the spirit of euphoria that swept through the land. Later would come the harshness
of facing up to a splintered future, of trying to re-establish normal life when
so much and so many had been destroyed.
I noticed him standing at the edge of the crowd, watching. I moved
towards him. Wordlessly, he took my hand and led me through a gate to a meadow.
He produced a flask of wine and two glasses and we sat on velvet grass.
I didn’t know him. He didn’t know me. We were lost in the
loneliness, the disconnection that follows the ending of a cataclysmic event
that absorbed everyone for four long years. We came together for mutual comfort,
to find passion and joy, however ephemeral.
You might say he swept me off my
feet.
Thank you, Tess, for this prompt. Click here to see more responses.
Hi Janice .. I love Tess' prompt .. I saw it on Theresa's posting and didn't properly take the reason for the picture in ... but your take is so different and I'm sure so true for so many at that time - and some who would find new hope ... very powerful posting .. Hilary
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Wonderful! A snippet of history, a personal story ... all done up in lovely prose.
ReplyDeleteI love that these prompts take us to different spaces, ones that together create a whole dancing collective of ideas, thoughts and dreams.
ReplyDeleteYour take is poignant and beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
Lovely! He did indeed...
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of an engaging tale Janice, loved it!
ReplyDeleteDenise
An English Girl Rambles
Ha, I love how the last line works so well with the painting. Your piece reminds me of a memoir by a nurse who served during WWI. It was hard for her to move on, and the next generation didn't understand.
ReplyDeletethis is lovely-wonderful take on the quirky image! have a great day!
ReplyDeleteI love your interpretation of the painting. Swept off her feet, indeed!
ReplyDeleteI went to the link and read quite a few poems about the painting. I liked uneven steven's take on it. I loved your story. It is interesting how chance encounters can stay with us for years and mean so much. It's like the photo of the sailor kissing the nurse in the U.S. when WWll was over.
ReplyDeleteYes, it seems it did sweep you off your feet. :)
ReplyDeleteswept off your feet...sure you did.
ReplyDeleteBitter-sweet and very poignant...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteah end of the war and a positive - uplifting
ReplyDeleteA sweet little story...
ReplyDeleteAwwww - I identified with many elements of this - memories evoked!!!
ReplyDeleteAn enjoyable read. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis happened to many people I'm sure. You wrote about it beautifully.
ReplyDeleteI don't believe I have ever been swept off my feet. What a wonderful story!
ReplyDeleteWhere did that come from?
ReplyDeleteA deep and unexpected reaction to the prompt, something that makes sense and provokes thought.
This little story sweeps ME off my feet.
ReplyDeleteJust great!
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I like what you did with this prompt. Well done!
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