Image by Stanley Kubrick for Look Magazine, 1949
Mag
174
Thanks
to Tess for this prompt. Go here to read others’ offerings.
Sara was bored. She’d only agreed to come to the hop to keep her
friend company. Now her friend had got off with a boy she’d been keen on for some
time and Sara was left kicking her heels. She would have gone home but her
friend was relying on her for a lift. A lad strolled over to her, hands in
pockets, very casual. She wasn’t instantly impressed but maybe things were
looking up.
He said, ‘Come on, baby, light my fire.’
‘Do you mean you’d like a light for your cigarette?’
‘Yeah.’
Flick,
flick, flick, flick.
‘You got fuel in that thing?’
‘Of course I have. Oh, look there you are – it’s working.’
‘Turn the flame down, can’t you? You nearly ‘ad me eyebrows
there.’
‘Complaints, complaints.’
‘Keep it steady, gel.’
‘I’m doing my best.’
‘Can’t get me fag near the flame.’
‘You could take your hands out of your pockets.’
‘Yeah, yeah, yeah.’
‘It’s alight now.’
‘About time, too. See ya.’
Sara turned away, sighing. He wasn’t a prepossessing lad but
he would have helped her pass the time until she was required to drive her
friend home. Really, these village hops were a total waste of time.
Years later, fifteen or sixteen maybe, Sara was reminded of this
conversation when she heard The Doors sing, ‘Light my fire’, and remembered the
uncouth youth with the slovenly manners. Maybe he had become a musician, a
songwriter. She’d never seen him after that night, not that she’d wanted to, of
course.
The days of village hops were far behind her, thank goodness,
and she’d managed to give up smoking, so no-one would ever again ask her for a
light.
Good title and picture.
ReplyDeleteGreetings,
Filip
Sensible lady! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat capture.
ReplyDeleteLeaving with The Doors in my head...
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah ... The Doors ... Break on through to the other side. Funny, and interesting, how there are so many ways of seeing that photo.
ReplyDeleteTerrific scene. Thank you. (love The Doors!)
ReplyDeleteHi Janice - sounds reminiscent of youth .. thankfully I never smoked .. but I too love The Doors - great scenario .. cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I'm imagining now that the boy grew up to be lead singer for The Doors.
ReplyDeleteLove your take on this...though I was a little disappointed she didn't take out his eyebrows. Still, it had a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteChanneling Jim Morrison and The Doors ~~~ oh yes.
ReplyDeleteNow she has to light other fires which is far more romantic then a cigarette :) !
ReplyDeleteI love this! The Doors are one of many on my list of favorites and I like how you portray that she's bored, just being a friend waiting on a friend. It's funny how she thinks back though when that song came out and how she gave up smoking. The ending almost had a hidden sadness to it, 'nobody would ask her for a light again'.
ReplyDeleteNow the song is stuck in my head!
ReplyDeleteHa - the old days. Today I know no one personally who smokes.
ReplyDeleteAnd fortunately the lad was in her past not her present
ReplyDeleteAh, if only it was always so! Fine write.
ReplyDeleteThis was an interesting scene. The best thing is she gave up smoking. :-)
ReplyDeleteMaybe she was the Twentieth Century Fox.
ReplyDelete;)
I loved this. Doors swing both ways in her future.
ReplyDeleteAnother good one Janice!
ReplyDeleteDenise
An English Girl Rambles
I’m surprised she didn’t tell him to boil his head.
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind.
I envy those who can write wonderful flash fiction. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI love how your use of the slang of the day just flows naturally
ReplyDeleteand I love the twist of who the lad turned out to be
Good story! I'm always amazed by how much social interaction seemed to have been dominated by cigarettes 50-60 years ago. Thank goodness most of us have gotten wiser.
ReplyDeleteI can't seem to decide if she is smart or just plain unromantic!
ReplyDeleteThanks fr coming by to my blog n fr your comments. I have been so irregular of late it’s encouraging to know you still read what I come up with.
Will be back to catch up....soon, I hope ! ;)
Great take on the photo prompt. And now that song will be with me all day long!
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