Saturday, 26 July 2025

The sequel

 

The sequel

 Image courtesy Wikimedia Commons

jenny-o commented on the musical box story, ‘I’ll bet that couple swore under their breath at being so rudely interrupted.’

That made me wonder, so I wrote a sequel. It developed rather more gloomily than I intended.


 The Little Dancers

As the lid descended and the music ceased, the couple stepped apart.                                            

Marjorie stamped her foot. ‘Every time,’ she complained, ‘Every time, just as we’re getting the steps almost right, that wretched child slams the door on us and the music stops.’

‘It doesn’t matter,’ Henry said. ‘We can practise without the music.’

 ‘You mean we could count the steps, one, two, three, four, twist, turn, glide?’ she scoffed. ‘Huh, I can’t see that helping. You can’t keep time even when the music plays AND you keep treading on my toes. It’s a wonder I can still walk, let alone dance.’

Not for the first time, Henry wondered what he had ever seen in Marjorie. He had been captivated by her elegance and her beauty, but all he could now register was her screeching voice.

He regretted – oh, how he regretted! – the contract he had made with her. It had stated quite clearly that they must remain together until the musical box stopped working. That had been sixty years ago, and they were weary of pirouetting on the mirrored floor. The box was also showing its age. The pins on the cylinder sometimes missed the teeth that made the music, and the key to wind the mechanism was having to be wound ever tighter.

 Henry had heard ‘overwound’ once or twice recently, when the little girl had been turning the key. An older woman, her grandmother, perhaps, had gently admonished the child to be careful or the music would stop playing.

 How Henry longed for that day to dawn, but then he wondered what would happen after that. With a jolt that made him gasp, he finally recognised that this box was his existence, the one he had embraced the day he and Marjorie had signed the contract. He and she were joined for eternity.

There was no escape. There would never be any more music, just the gathering gloom, and an occasional glimpse of daylight when a stranger opened the box to see the little dancers with their painted smiles and wonder why the music had stopped.

33 comments:

  1. Noooo!! How sad! But thank you for writing a sequel.
    Maybe - if you're up for it - you could write an alternative ending . . . like those "choose your adventure" books that were popular for kids in the 80s and 90s ... or maybe Henry and Marjorie really are locked into their current existence . . .

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    1. It's funny you should say that, Jenny . . . but don't hold your breath. 😁

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  2. Nice; sad, but the music does eventually stop.

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  3. That is sad, even with no music he and Marjorie are forever together when they would prefer otherwise.

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  4. Always be careful what you wish for 😉

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  5. Or a trip to The Repair Shop🫢

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    1. I did wonder about that - there must be specialists.

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  6. Fortunately the quality of these things is not the same anymore and after if you are lucky it lasts 5 years, then everything changes, in this case the contract , but who would cook, wash and iron for him after the music stops ?

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  7. How terribly sad to have to spend eternity with someone who doesn't make you happy. I wonder how many people stay together long after the music stops simply because it's the easiest thing to do.

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  8. That's a profound statement, Ann.

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  9. Getting dark. Keep going.

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    1. You don't want to see the murk in my head . . .

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  10. My brain being what it is, I can’t remember the prequel, but this is rather poignant, so that is okay.

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    1. Not to worry - I'm not setting questions! 😁

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  11. This reminds me of a musical box that my mother brought back from Italy when I was a little boy. When you raised the lid it played "Come Prima" and the lone dancer inside pirouetted, reflected on the mirror inside the lid.

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  12. They never last, do they?

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  13. I think if I had been stuck in that dark, tiny box for all those years, I might be a bit out of sorts too.

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  14. This sounds like a good Twilight Zone story.

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  15. You're good at this kind of short stories with a twist at the end!! ...

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  16. Another great story with a twist. You certainly have a talent for these!

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  17. You do write a good story.

    All the best Jan

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