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Shell Shock
Clare loved shells and had collected them all her life. They were displayed informally in baskets and bowls throughout her house and garden and were beautiful reminders of happy days at the seaside and fabulous holidays in exotic locations.
Her favourite shells had pride of place in her bedroom, delicate pastel greens and pinks echoing the colours of her soft furnishings. Her room was comfortable, relaxing, tastefully decorated. Gerry was abroad so often on business that she felt the room belonged more to her than to them. When he was at home he worked excessively long hours and frequently stayed in the guest bedroom or even at his club so that she shouldn’t be disturbed. He was very considerate.
It was only recently that Clare had begun to realise just how thoughtful he was or at least, how much thought he put into his actions. He had left a cryptic message on her phone - ‘A word in your shell-like.’ What was that supposed to mean? She called to ask him what he wanted to tell her. Gerry replied that he didn’t have anything to say to her but that maybe she should consult her shells. They would tell her plenty.
Clare had dabbled in Tarot and astrology but had never considered reading shells. Maybe Gerry was teasing her. She wandered about the house, trickling shells through her fingers, but could find nothing untoward. In her bedroom she studied her special collection. She touched each one lightly, then noticed a stranger, one that didn’t belong. She picked it out and turned it over in her hands. It was just a small conch, a very pretty one, to be sure, but nothing remarkable. Now, as she examined it more closely, she saw the minute spy camera tucked inside and her stomach turned over at the memory of what it would have recorded.
Gerry filed for divorce of course, and naturally Clare did not contest it. Shells featured prominently in her consciousness – she was shell-shocked, she had been shellacked, she had retreated into her shell but ‘A word in your shell-like’ had never seemed so bitterly apt as she drove away from the court.
Very clever use of the prompt, I loved it!
ReplyDeleteA cunning tale! Nice Write.
ReplyDeleteOuch... wonderfully spiny as are some shells. Fabulous tale.
ReplyDeleteOoo...clever word-play going on there. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
What a sneaky twist!
ReplyDeletemoving, shell-shocked and shell-lacked are brilliant words to showcase emotions,
ReplyDeletewell done magpie.
I didn't expect the end wonderful story-telling!
ReplyDeleteNice write. I love the notion of reading shells.
ReplyDeleteWell that just goes to show you - never take for granted what you have or what you are given.
ReplyDeleteWhat a rat!
ReplyDeleteWhat did he expect would happen if he left his wife alone all the time.
I am wholly on her side.
Nicely told!
ReplyDeleteGood story. I didn't expect the ending. I have a lot of shells, but none with cameras in. They'd just see me and the cat anyway!
ReplyDeleteoh my... this is one shell of a story! great job :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, very nicely done, Janice.
ReplyDelete— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Beautiful shell put to a sinister purpose. A surprise too since I suspected the husband--- Very clever take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteUh-oh. How ironic for her to be exposed by a shell. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteVery cryptic. I was left at the end wondering was she better off? - Lots of room for the imagination to fill in the blanks.
ReplyDeleteWhoa. That was unexpected. I thought he would be the one fooling around on her at first. Very good.
ReplyDeleteA world lives in this tiny piece - wonderfully well written tale.
ReplyDeleteOh my ! fortunately I don't collect shells and my room is also rather boring besides my cat collection,but to be sure I'll check immediately if there is a hidden camera in one of the cats !
ReplyDeleteI say it again, you have a blooming phantasy ! lol !
Well done, I did not see that ending coming.
ReplyDelete...it's interesting how everything goes and becomes with those shells... amazing write my friend... thanks for the reads.(:
ReplyDelete~Kelvin
ooooops!
ReplyDeleteA good story line, using the prompt in an unusual way.
ReplyDeletenice twist!
ReplyDeleteArtful twist! Just like that shell!
ReplyDeleteThank you, one and all, for your comments:-)
ReplyDeleteLovely, clever story.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Great! I didn't see that one coming, and I enjoy how you play with words. So creative!
ReplyDeleteThoroughly amazing how you worked so many 'shells' into this tale!
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