Tess Kincaid hosts this meme. Thank you, Tess J Each week she posts a photograph from her
archive to act as a visual prompt and followers respond as they see fit. Some
versify, some don’t. Click here to see entries and perhaps join in.
Under Windsor Bridge, 1912, by Adolphe Valette
He trudged along the river bank, hands thrust deep into the
pockets of his heavy overcoat. Nearing the bridge, he stopped, pulling his hat
down over his head and tightening his scarf against the invasive damp. Horses’
hooves clattered along the road overhead and the rumble of carriage wheels
drummed and hummed in the dank air.
A yellow grey fog drifted across the greasy water, wreathing the
passing barges and diffusing the light from their lanterns. The dreariness of
the scene suited his mood and he stared into the murky depths of the river,
remembering.
There was only one thing that would release him from his
melancholy. Cleansing the city of its filth made him euphoric. Those do-gooders
who claimed that all human life was to be valued were wrong. He saw the expression
in the eyes of the girls as he strangled them and knew they were grateful to be
released.
What wonderful words to accompany the painting! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI should clarify that the words are beautifully written, despite the macabre subject! :)
ReplyDeleteQuite a shocker, but well written...
ReplyDeleteWhoa. That's dark!
ReplyDeleteWow..you just crawled into Jack The Rippers mind...creepy.
ReplyDeleteEerily spooky and dark .. well written too!
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Very scary.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written but how creepy!
ReplyDeleteAck!!
ReplyDelete:-) Excellent. What an excellent little story. Caught me off-guard and gave me a chill. Well done!
Pearl
def felt the atmosphere in this...a real old pea souper!!
ReplyDeletethe expression of their eyes and the outhanging tongue you forgot to mention ! No wonder that you can't sleep at night !
ReplyDeleteI wondered if anybody would take the prompt in this direction. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAnd creepy.
=)
oh very nice.. a little Jack in him i believe....scary when they think they are doing something good as they kill...
ReplyDeleteYou captured it!
ReplyDeleteOooh, I didn't see that coming. A brilliant twist.
ReplyDeleteOh my ....it was a dark and spooky piece! But very good indeed!
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