Sunday, 17 November 2024

A dystopian tale

 

The following was a response to a writing prompt.

A dystopian tale

In a post-apocalyptic world, Mary had clung to her faith with obdurate resistance. She knew her beliefs would cause her strife, but her mission was to proselytise, no matter what the consequences, for the truth must be broadcast. She sang, she preached, she prayed, always aware that she was being watched and that reports were being sent to the Authorities.

Came the day when she was arrested and, without recourse to common justice, found guilty of sedition. Her sentence, banishment to the outer reaches of the universe, did not seem so terrible, for she could continue her work there, among the congregations of the exiled who had preceded her. It was not like the horrifying punishments suffered by earlier saints, for so she believed she would become. Not for her the excruciating torment of being burned alive, or of being lowered into boiling oil, or the slow suffocation of being crushed to death. The Authorities deplored such savage acts. The New Order advocated mercy to those who would not bend to their laws.

She was to be sent into space, suitably garbed, to live on one of the satellites, far, far away from Earth. She was sad to leave her home and her supporters. It would be hard never again to breathe sweet, fresh air, to feel the sun or breeze upon her skin. She would miss the dawning of the days and the sunsets, the sound of wind in the trees and birdsong at dusk, but she would survive.

A short time into her journey, she was informed that her life support system was to be removed from her, and she was to be jettisoned into the outer darkness. An unimaginable end awaited her. She closed her eyes and prayed.

26 comments:

  1. It's almost my bedtime, so thanks for that.

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  2. Oh no! That final paragraph was unexpected.

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  3. Dark, dark dark. What a cheerful read over breakfast today!!

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  4. Cruelty, but not where their eyes can see it.......

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  5. The story ends as rapidly as Mary's life surely did. With hindsight, she might have chosen to be an atheist... or she could have faked it. Now she'll never get to the Bingo again.

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  6. How beautifully you've conveyed a picture of Mary in such a brief space. Her unexpected tragic fate caught me by surprise and saddened me.

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  7. People still die for their faith today, sadly.

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  8. Thought provoking and clever .
    Alison in Wales x

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  9. I have dark moments, sometimes . . . 😮😶

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    1. We rarely see the evil until it's upon us.

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  11. That ending. Didn't see that coming. Out of sight, The New Order can be as cruel as they want.

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    1. All wrapped up in tidy words and justifications.

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    1. Wouldn't it be nice to live in Utopia? Or would it?

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  13. Well written, Janice, and I really didn't see the ending coming ... xxx

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    1. Life is scary - we never know what's coming next.

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  15. Goodness! The ending was unexpected!
    I need a recuperating cup of tea now!!!

    All the best Jan

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