April A-Z
blogging challenge 2012
O is for the fifteenth of 26 short stories - 250 words or
fewer - about the life and times of a fictional character called Alice.
In October 1957 Alice’s first child was born. When Ivy visited
her in hospital she gazed at the pleated face of her grandson. He yawned and
opened his fathomless navy blue eyes.
‘Have you thought of any names?’ Ivy asked.
‘Norman and I decided on Edward John,’ said Alice. Her mother
blinked back tears and looked down at the baby.
‘He has a look of Edward about him,’ she said softly as the
baby grasped her finger.
As Edward John grew into a sturdy toddler his resemblance to
his late uncle intensified. Even Norman’s parents, who had only ever seen
photographs of Edward as a young man, remarked on the likeness.
Daniel’s perpetual gloom lifted whenever he saw his nephew.
The lines of pain scored on his face softened and Ruth, watching him, glimpsed
a shadow of the young man she had married. Not for the first time she wondered
if her marriage would have been happier if there had been children. The little
boy was quieter when he was with Daniel, as though he sensed an unquiet soul.
For Ivy, he was her lost son returned. His temperament was
exactly that of Edward’s. He was a mischievous, loving child, often in scrapes
and full of smiles. His infectious giggle made everybody laugh, particularly
Ivy, whose face lit up every time she saw him. The years of sorrow dropped away
and she became again the spirited woman she had been before the war.
Oh, it is so true that a young child can change hearts! What a gift to all was Edward John.
ReplyDeleteAww, I love how a newcomer to the family made everything a little brighter again!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet story, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWagging Tales
Nothing like the miracle of a baby.
ReplyDeletechildren are a wondrous blessing
ReplyDeleteI love 'he has the look of an Edward' - so sweet
wonderful story
Thanks for sharing. I loved this story. :) Oh, kids are a blessing, and can change alot. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm visiting from the A to Z circuit.
ReplyDelete... I caught the story in the middle... but it seems like the arrival of the baby has brought joy to quite a few characters...
Enjoy the rest of the challenge.
Nice to meet you. *waves*
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I am really enjoying your story Janice-very moving and I look forward to each new episode!
ReplyDeleteWonderful! So, this is my firt time here, so I hope to find more on this story...or, wait, I think it said 26 short stories..which is totally cool too! Loved this - want to know more!!! Great, and smooth (which is a compliment), writing!
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Wonderful! So, this is my firt time here, so I hope to find more on this story...or, wait, I think it said 26 short stories..which is totally cool too! Loved this - want to know more!!! Great, and smooth (which is a compliment), writing!
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Wonderful! So, this is my firt time here, so I hope to find more on this story...or, wait, I think it said 26 short stories..which is totally cool too! Loved this - want to know more!!! Great, and smooth (which is a compliment), writing!
ReplyDeleteTexas Playwright Chick
Glad to see that Edward made a little happiness return to the family.
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful that the toddler is somehow reaching Daniel!
ReplyDeleteHi Janice .. interesting that the new grand/son affected so many .. as I'm sure they do in real life - good to read about Ruth feeling happier, and then Daniel responding ..
ReplyDeleteCheers Hilary
It sounds like little Edward John is bringing some sunshine to lift everyone's spirits.
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