Friday, 2 July 2010

Friday Flash 55 The bride


It's time for Friday Flash 55. To join in write a story in 55 words (no more, no less) then tell Mr. Knowitall by leaving a comment on his own Flash 55 post today.

 She stepped gracefully from the carriage and posed for photos, one hand on the horse's harness. Moving forwards she was abruptly halted. The horse had stood on her train and ripped off her headdress. As she stooped to retrieve it he snatched a mouthful from her bouquet then nudged her over.

Were these bad omens?
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10 comments:

  1. Brian Miller2 July 2010 at 12:46

    smiles. yes i think so...or maybe the dawning of a new reality tv series...or at least a few good funniest home videos...nice 55...

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  2. John (@bookdreamer)2 July 2010 at 14:20

    Nope but perhaps the blooded corpses staggering out of the church may put a damper on the day. My 55 here

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  3. anthonynorth2 July 2010 at 15:12

    I think they might be. Nice one.
    By the way, I had trouble with your link on G-Man. You might want to check it.

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  4. Mo2 July 2010 at 17:43

    A great beginning

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  5. Kay2 July 2010 at 17:52

    No, no... not for sure... Bad things sometimes just happen. I'd call it bad luck though.

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  6. Anonymous2 July 2010 at 18:54

    Nawh. Not bad omens. Just a horse being a horse of course of course. :) Great 55 my friend. Have a wonderful weekend :)

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  7. Nara Malone2 July 2010 at 21:06

    Laughing. Will she be wis enough to see?

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  8. Alice Audrey2 July 2010 at 21:39

    I can just see it. Hope she wasn't too concerned about her dignity, bad omens or not.

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  9. G-Man2 July 2010 at 22:14

    Awwww....
    I just think she tasted good!
    Excellent 55 Janice.
    Welcome back to the fold My friend.
    Your fine post is very much appreciated.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

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  10. Susan at Stony River3 July 2010 at 04:56

    The horse knows something -- run girl! LOL

    I like that last line, and love the whole thing.
    ;-)

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