Friday 2 July 2010

Friday Flash 55 The bride

It's time for Friday Flash 55. To join in write a story in 55 words (no more, no less) then tell Mr. Knowitall by leaving a comment on his own Flash 55 post today.

She stepped gracefully from the carriage and posed for photos, one hand on the horse's harness. Moving forwards she was abruptly halted. The horse had stood on her train and ripped off her headdress. As she stooped to retrieve it he snatched a mouthful from her bouquet then nudged her over.

Were these bad omens?


  1. smiles. yes i think so...or maybe the dawning of a new reality tv series...or at least a few good funniest home videos...nice 55...

  2. Nope but perhaps the blooded corpses staggering out of the church may put a damper on the day. My 55 here

  3. I think they might be. Nice one.
    By the way, I had trouble with your link on G-Man. You might want to check it.

  4. No, no... not for sure... Bad things sometimes just happen. I'd call it bad luck though.

  5. Nawh. Not bad omens. Just a horse being a horse of course of course. :) Great 55 my friend. Have a wonderful weekend :)

  6. Laughing. Will she be wis enough to see?

  7. I can just see it. Hope she wasn't too concerned about her dignity, bad omens or not.

  8. Awwww....
    I just think she tasted good!
    Excellent 55 Janice.
    Welcome back to the fold My friend.
    Your fine post is very much appreciated.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

  9. The horse knows something -- run girl! LOL

    I like that last line, and love the whole thing.


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